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The Velvet Clock
A bureaucratic horror story about stolen time, procedural violence, and the cost of restoring people who have been reduced to records.
01 - CONTENTS
6 ARTIFACTS
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LOG
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The Velvet Estate
Lio Maren challenges a laundered estate lot and becomes collateral.
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CHAPTER
The Frozen Square
The frozen square clarifies collateral harm and sends Lio toward South Bridge.
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The Tollhouse Debt
Lio finds the ledger trail and the named return chits.
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04
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The Ledger Names
Lio attempts a return and learns what debt keeps when time is stolen.
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05
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The Forgetting Window
The Office narrows the pursuit and Lio faces the cost of being remembered.
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